【看待合作英语作文初中】比较难上手的中考英语作文(附王进老师范文)

我们先看题目吧。

在教室里，李华同学们为运动会接力赛中摔倒的对手而战，为失去奖牌的事而战。扶也不能扶，双方要各持己见，针锋相对。

正方：

I think we should help the competitor who falls down in the running race。

班邦

I don ' t think we should help the competitor who falls down in the running race。

提示

Fall down

Lose the match

Agree with

Disagree with

团队工作(Teamwork)

首先，我们来看看试卷中包含的标准范文

这篇范文有很多我个人感受到的问题。

标准范文

I think we should help the competitor who falls down in the running race。

it ' s known to us all that friends come first in any competitions。and we hold the sports meeting to spread the good sports manship and enjoy the

I still remember one of the competitors in class two fell down by accident and couldn ' t standup by himself in the sports meeting last term . cons G thathe was so thankful to me。although I lost the match、we hatch

In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other in the school races . there fore，I think we should help the fallen competitor if we can。

1.其中一个学生扶着摔倒的另一个同学，而不是作者本人。这里用第一人称我感觉不太合适。

2.我个人认为，应该从扶或扶中引出其他论点。不仅仅是说扶或扶。

3.应对第二点，个人的个人经历不应该是在赛场上帮助人。

所以我个人认为应该这样寻找论点。

如果扶植，就意味着帮助别人，我们可以引导合作比竞争更重要。以此为纲，在我们的学习生活中找到相应的事例。

不扶我的话，我也觉得没关系。比赛本来就残酷激烈，所以在比赛中摔倒，说明运气不好，实力不足，可见运气也是比赛的一部分。

所以我来看王珍老师的范文和事例。

开始正向：

I think we should help the competitor who falls down in the running race，because besides competition，cooperation is more important。

(cooperation=teamwork合作，团队工作)

正向方案：

1.我记忆中有一件事。there is an incident still in my memory。

2.故事背景lastterm，our school organized an competition on maths，which we could join in either in group or by one self。

3、故事开发I was good at maths、so I wanted to finish the competition alone、but little by little、the questions was becoming harder and harder

4.故事的高潮三个eing that、a class mate invited me to join his team and under our cooperation、we all solved the problem和which made us satisfies

5.故事的结论from then on，I realized the teamwork is more valuable。

“学习这种四段叙事作文”

结尾：(only诱导反转句)

All in all，only when we understand the meaning of cooperation can we become a better person .

看到反对方的开始，踏上了运气的重要性

I don ' t think we should help the competitor who falls down in the running race，because good luck is also the part of the fierce and cruel competer

(fierce and cruel competition process激烈残酷的竞争过程)

相反的事例

1、there is an incident still in my memory。

2、lastterm、our school organized a football league among classes。

3、in one game、our class was more powerful than another class、but we wasted too many good opportunities while they had a goal by accident

4、from then on、I realized based on the ability、good luck is also important .

国际足球联盟(足球联盟)

动力强劲的性能

By accident无意中

Lose the game输掉了比赛

来看结局

All in all，in order to get a good grade in a competition，we should have not only powerful strength but also good luck。

各位，请对英语的大神给予批评和纠正。